| "The Brothers' Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Update Soon Please
Reviewed By: Lavender Rose On: October 09, 2010 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story. It`s different but good. I like the Sess/Miro lemon more. I don`t really like the Sess/Inu lemon though. It just seems like something is missing in it, or maybe it just needs to be longer. Anyway love the story update soon.
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Reviewed By: MaroonWolf18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2010 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this very much. I really liked the Sess/Mir pairing more, but still very much enjoyed the Sess/Inu pairing. Great job. Why don't you write up some more? Continue the story. Perhaps bring Kouga into the picture? Who knows. You should read my stories. I have Full Moon Wedding: Inuyasha related... Assassin's Cove, and my most recent, HUGE one, greatly written to hell and back. Tattered Soul... if you like dark, dank, twisted, sadistic shit... that's the story for you... I m currently in the middle of writing up the next chapter, on another tab away from this window, on my laptop, on the wordpad. lol
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Title: enjoying
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I like this fic I like Inu and sess there so hot and the monk is a nice play toy. please updates soon.
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Title: Possesive Brother
Reviewed By: Nakia Brown On: April 12, 2010 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
to be honest i really liked the character you turned sesshomaru into and the way he acted i thought it was funny how he gave his dad the innocent face and stil his dad said no. i also like the part when sesshomaru has inuyasha pinned by his neck and how he trips him bach to the floor. but the one thing i find the funniest is when their dad leaves inuyasha to sesshomaru's punishment an how he gives in so easily and does what seshomaru doe when he says "leave" and inuyasha takes off runinning without a second thought. i like how sesshomaru acts when he told his dad that the instructor took a vacation and how he settled things with shiro.
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2010 17:24 CST
Comment/Review:
So far so good, though I hope Sess & Inu start to get along better. Will have see how the story progresses.
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Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2009 17:45 CST
Comment/Review:
not flaming. not reading. just not my thing. just thought id let you know that in the summary you said "spoilt" but probably meant "spoiled" simple mistake simple correction. happy fanfic-ing! :)
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