| "Hidden Within" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2002 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's great so far!!! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: BlueMinx On: July 28, 2002 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee-hee-hee.....!!!! I love it!! I can't wait to see how Vegeta reacts to finding out Bulma is a Saiyajin...Hey! Does her sprouting a tail have anything do do with her perhaps coming of age, maybe......That certainly would be something...And boy will that other slutty chick be jealous...And I liked how Vegeta reffered to Bulma as 'Woman' and Navessa as 'girl'....priceless. But by him saying that, does that mean that Bulma is already of age, or that he just considers her more of a woman than any of the other girls because she showed some balls by standing up to him?
Anyway, I love your fic and can't wait for you to continue it!!!! |
Reviewed By: Layla On: July 28, 2002 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!Your fanfic is great!Please,update it!ASAP!!!!
It's really good.Congratulations and keep^ the good work!!! |
