"Unlikely Alliances" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: gREAT Reviewed By: Shadow2040ad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2010 02:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: great story look forward to new chapters
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2010 23:32 CST Comment/Review: Okay this one is turning out to be just plain fun to read. Looking forward to more when you can
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Reviewed By: nikichan On: January 16, 2010 23:31 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoy reading your stories, because there fun to read and they update fast. Please keep it up until the end. As for pairing in this story. I think Kasumi should be with Ranma. She would appreciate him more and be more patient with him. Plus it will be fun reading if no one suspects the Ranma/Kasumi pairing and how shocked everyone will be when they find out. Maybe you should try is suggestion. If you want to. I hope you do use it to play with in some way for this story. Good Luck and Bye!
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