"The Lost Stars" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Apropos On: February 19, 2010 01:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Tie pilot coronary indeed. Imagine how many gaskets will be blown ounce they build a Battroid scale lightsaber for our favorite Jedi... Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of this, and OHWP:2, the sooner the better. ^_^
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Title: Want More! Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2010 12:40 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yeah, rouge=makeup, rogue=rebel. Still, I can forgive a LOT if the story is compelling. And there are many talented writers out there for whom English is as second or third language still being learned. So, you are well ahead of the pack. Write more! ^☺^
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Reviewed By: ianmajor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 23:25 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Does the, ACK, NEED more sum it up nicely? I love both series, and can't wait to see where it goes, personally I would have gone with a more modern REF SDF, but that's just my personal love for REALLY Big ships coming through.
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Reviewed By: damocles7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 22:58 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Nice concept. I shall read this fic with great interest. Just... Rouge or Rogue? Which is it?
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Reviewed By: wolff2063 On: January 18, 2010 22:14 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh. Hell. Yes! This one's gonna be a lot of fun. I've really enjoyed your other stories, and I think this one's gonna be par for the course. Only one minor nitpick: you might want to go back through and doublecheck your spell check. The one that really jumped out at me was "rouge squadron". I think you mean "rogue" here ;) wolff2063@gmail.com
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Title: Robotech Rocks Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 21:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Gotta love Robotech, though I never watched anything beyond the old Macross RDF anime. So how will reflex tech mix with the force? I wait to see how you continue this storyline. Please don't forget your other stories, either. ^☻^ uoɔıʇoɯǝ ʇɐq ʎǝןıɯs ǝɥʇ ɹɐǝɟ
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 20:59 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Pretty good. I didn't see anything that looked like a plot hole and the people all acted like i would expect them too. I will definitly be keeping an eye out to see where this goes.
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