| "Where do I belong?" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yacki On: October 13, 2002 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I just want to say that your story is awesome! I can't wait until Gohan gets to meet his real family (He is isn't he?). And then to see how he'll deal with having two sets of parents. Please keep on writing and get the next chapter out soon! |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: September 24, 2002 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter...i'm not much of a writer in case you havn't noticed...lol |
Reviewed By: crazekitte On: September 20, 2002 10:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!! This fanfic was so cute! Can't w3ait for the next chapter.
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! |
Reviewed By: Saturn-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
who would make a four-year-old study? ChiChi, fryingpan in hand, would....
Little known fact: Chichi, in Japanese, means father |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: September 19, 2002 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it! keeps getting better! |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I anticipate what happens next. Will there be a time skip, or will Gohan continue to grow up and go through more changes, Like the full moon. PLEASE DON'T CUT HIS TAIL OFF!!!! *screams* DON'T CUT THAT BEAUTIFUL TAIL OFF!!! murder of the appendage!!! *cries out* O.O okay, I think I'm done ranting. Anyway, you have fun...just pleeease, don't kill his tail! arg! >_ |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I anticipate what happens next. Will there be a time skip, or will Gohan continue to grow up and go through more changes, Like the full moon. PLEASE DON'T CUT HIS TAIL OFF!!!! *screams* DON'T CUT THAT BEAUTIFUL TAIL OFF!!! murder of the appendage!!! *cries out* O.O okay, I think I'm done ranting. Anyway, you have fun...just pleeease, don't kill his tail! arg! >_ |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: September 09, 2002 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know i love it! |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover@yahoo.com On: September 05, 2002 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where do i belong? will u put me on the mailing list? |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it very much. I anticipate the next chapter. *wink* I'm glad you allowed what you wanted into this chapter. Introduction and reminiscance is the next step to plot development. I hope that Gohan decides to help the Earth's special forces. I'm sure Goku will recognize him almost right away... in the face, gohan and goku are nearly identical. Yet again, you have me baffled! Enjoyed it quite throughly!!!! *applauds* |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2002 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. yes, I know exactly what you mean. *wink* being a super saiyan is all about the battle... there is no such thing as 'being easy' on someone... Anyway, amazing chapter! I hope that eventually Gohan is found by his family, although I know it will be under some unusual circumstances. I will say, that was very intense. I enjoyed it immensly!!! Keep up the good work! oh yeah, add me to your mailing list... You know I gotta have that!!! ^_- Royal_Vegeta81@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Lee_chan On: August 30, 2002 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD ICE ANGEL YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS FANFICTION!!! OR ATLEAST ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER! LOL this story is really good keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god! you have to give me the next chapter!!!! I'm so tempted to ask you if I can host your story on my website!!!! I love the story and where it's going. I was on the edge of my seat! Bravo!! |
Reviewed By: Tokumei Kibon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 17:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
A-a-annngst????
Oh NO!!! *cries* I don't kinow if I will be able to take it! Hopefully everything will be resolved in the end though. I'm ready to brave through it all since this is such a great fic! |
Reviewed By: Tokumei Kibon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2002 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o O forgot to say what stories I wanna be on mailing lists for. This one, and Trials and Tribulations please!!
^.^
I absolutely adore this fic. I am seriously wanting to know what Chichi will do once she and Gohan meet again. (Whenever that may be!) It's be so cool if she and Goku fought the Daemons for Gohan, though it's not as though I HATE the Daemons! ^^;; I just think it'd be awesome to see Erik and Chichi face off or something.. o.o
I can't WAIT to see Gohan attack that guy in that teaser!!!! O.O Go GOHAN!!! |
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