| "Where do I belong?" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: sisko66002 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful story that I wish I had discovered a long time ago and leaves me hoping that the next chapter will come soon.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 01:28 CDT
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You should come back to fan fiction and finish your stories. They're all very good. I really like this one. I have welling tears. If Vegeta and Piccolo do answer Gohan's questions about his orgions How will Gohan react? I can see him becomming annoyed at Piccolo for witholding the information and possibly trusting Vegeta who never exactly lied to him. Eric I can see reacting to the news that Gohan is the son of Son Goku. Having been in the Martial Arts community his entire life and competed worldwide I assume that Eric would know who Goku is. After all, Goku won the WMAT once and placed second twice. Also if you assume that Eric is the same age as Goku, if not a little older, its possible that they may have even competed against each other. You could even decide that Eric entered the 23re tournament and was knocked out during the prelims by any of the Z fighters (and that includes Chichi who went through her mat like a knife through butter). You might want to finally give Cas a break though Hasn't the girl been through enough? Well' I'm nearing the end of the character allotment for this review so I'll stop now. Your writing style is good and the plot is engaging. I look forward to the possibility that it one day may be finished. -El-
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 20:19 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 12:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! You need to update!!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 19:34 CST
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Great Story! Would you mind getting back to work on your other stories? |
Reviewed By: eyes_on_the_birdie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's really going great! i never would have thought it would get so dark though. |
Reviewed By: Sunshine066 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 19:41 CST
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N-NANI!?!? Who was that!? Piccolo!? Vegeta!? WHO FOR KAMI'S SAKE!?!?!? *whimpers* Even though it may not seem like it, that was probably one of the cruellest cliffies I've ever seen... Even if it was slightly hidden, NOW I HAVE TO WAIT A WHOLE CHAPTER TO SEE WHO IT WAS, AND MAYBE EVEN MORE TO FIND OUT IF HE TELLS THE Z-FIGHTERS ABOUT IT!!! Now you have to update before I die of curiosity so, byee! ^_^() |
Reviewed By: ????? On: November 28, 2002 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic keep up the good work hope for a new chapter soon |
Reviewed By: Cypress On: November 28, 2002 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should keep writing this story it's great |
Reviewed By: Nice On: November 26, 2002 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey the fic is great real creative and fun to read can't wait for next chapter keep up good work |
Reviewed By: Sunshine066 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, that was one of the creepiest chapters... But I liked how you went into detail about Gohan's mental fight. Please update soon!
~Sunshine066~ |
Reviewed By: skm On: November 21, 2002 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
would have been a 10 if it was finished.it is pretty good |
Reviewed By: Sunshine066 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color OMG, YOU'VE GOTTA UPDATE! I'm really glad you told me that or else I wouldn't have even known... *looks @ reviews* Only 24!? Over @ ff.net you have over, like, 200! Dang... Well, I'll be waiting for an update! Ja ne! ^__^
~Sunshine066~ |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: November 01, 2002 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good one...but what's with the cliff hanger? are you trying to drive me crazy? |
Reviewed By: Saturn-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 18:54 CDT
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You're evil.....making us wait this long and BAM!!! hitting us with a clickhanger....*lol* J/K moree soon, though!!! Loved it!!! Jaane! |
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