| "Where do I belong?" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: ????? On: November 28, 2002 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic keep up the good work hope for a new chapter soon |
Reviewed By: Cypress On: November 28, 2002 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should keep writing this story it's great |
Reviewed By: Nice On: November 26, 2002 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey the fic is great real creative and fun to read can't wait for next chapter keep up good work |
Reviewed By: Sunshine066 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, that was one of the creepiest chapters... But I liked how you went into detail about Gohan's mental fight. Please update soon!
~Sunshine066~ |
Reviewed By: skm On: November 21, 2002 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
would have been a 10 if it was finished.it is pretty good |
Reviewed By: Sunshine066 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color OMG, YOU'VE GOTTA UPDATE! I'm really glad you told me that or else I wouldn't have even known... *looks @ reviews* Only 24!? Over @ ff.net you have over, like, 200! Dang... Well, I'll be waiting for an update! Ja ne! ^__^
~Sunshine066~ |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: November 01, 2002 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good one...but what's with the cliff hanger? are you trying to drive me crazy? |
Reviewed By: Saturn-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 18:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
You're evil.....making us wait this long and BAM!!! hitting us with a clickhanger....*lol* J/K moree soon, though!!! Loved it!!! Jaane! |
Reviewed By: Yacki On: October 13, 2002 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I just want to say that your story is awesome! I can't wait until Gohan gets to meet his real family (He is isn't he?). And then to see how he'll deal with having two sets of parents. Please keep on writing and get the next chapter out soon! |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: September 24, 2002 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter...i'm not much of a writer in case you havn't noticed...lol |
Reviewed By: crazekitte On: September 20, 2002 10:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!! This fanfic was so cute! Can't w3ait for the next chapter.
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! |
Reviewed By: Saturn-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
who would make a four-year-old study? ChiChi, fryingpan in hand, would....
Little known fact: Chichi, in Japanese, means father |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: September 19, 2002 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it! keeps getting better! |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I anticipate what happens next. Will there be a time skip, or will Gohan continue to grow up and go through more changes, Like the full moon. PLEASE DON'T CUT HIS TAIL OFF!!!! *screams* DON'T CUT THAT BEAUTIFUL TAIL OFF!!! murder of the appendage!!! *cries out* O.O okay, I think I'm done ranting. Anyway, you have fun...just pleeease, don't kill his tail! arg! >_ |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I anticipate what happens next. Will there be a time skip, or will Gohan continue to grow up and go through more changes, Like the full moon. PLEASE DON'T CUT HIS TAIL OFF!!!! *screams* DON'T CUT THAT BEAUTIFUL TAIL OFF!!! murder of the appendage!!! *cries out* O.O okay, I think I'm done ranting. Anyway, you have fun...just pleeease, don't kill his tail! arg! >_ |
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