Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Frozen Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2012 10:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was very well-written and had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. The concept of a teen girl injected with Delta 67 who has secret meetings with the enemy is an interesting one indeed. Your character is enjoyable to read as she is very different from the norm of third Chiropteran Queens that are allied with Diva. It is very refreshing to see a character that doesn't fit the aforementioned concept that has practically become an archetype for Blood+ OCs with Solomon. Instead, she has actual flaws and a personality of her own, unlike the third Queens who are exactly like Diva and perfect because of their status as the most powerful member of their race Your spelling and grammar is great and I applaud you for not using honorifics in a story where European characters are centered on. It is more realistic and further captures the essence of the already established cast in the series. This is a wonderful story and I'm not sure you're going to continue it, but I must thank you for writing this since it is is possibly the most original story with Solomon. You are a great writer and your talent would be a very big contribution to the Blood+ fanfiction community. Perhaps enable anonymous reviews or try Fanfiction.net? With the latter you are most likely ensured of more feedback as the fanfic community there is still ever-growing, especially in the Blood+ section. Anyway, I wish you all the best and hope to see more content from you if you have the chance. In the meantime take care. -Frosty |
