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| "Within You" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2010 02:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update! I'm really liking how this is coming along so far. It's curious that you decided to use Kaede instead of Kikyou, Kaede is very rarely featured as a younger woman, but since I'm Inu/Kag all the way it doesn't really matter to me what name you give the "other" woman. We started the story in present-time, so we already know that Inuyasha eventually gets his act together and decides to fight for Kagome's hand. I'm enjoying the flashbacks, to get us filled in on the true details behind their past, but now I can't wait to jump back to the present and see how things progress from there! Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2010 01:26 EST
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i'm thinking that the king had already had kouga's proposal (he was probably one of the first, if not the first), one wonders whose proposal the king was holding out for. -♣- you friended me on fb? *checks friends list* not under lil6ter though... you're going to have to send me a note or write on my wall or something, because i have so many 'game friends' that i kind of block (since they're always asking for help), so i can put you on the 'real life friends' list. =D ♦ apparently, if he went with keade, he didn't stay with her since he's there ready to duel with kouga over kagome... ♥
| Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2010 21:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Would I be wrong in asking if you perhaps gained a bit of inspiration of this from Wuthering Heights? The plots are eerily similar, of course being a classic, it's nearly the same as telling a Cinderella story. You're capturing it quite well, I must say. The emotions are raw, and the passion is just beginning. I'm quite eager to find out how InuYasha went from trying to life his own, separate life, to challenging Kagome's suitor to a duel for her hand. And I also wonder why you decided to use Kaede as the woman he ran off with, instead of Kikyou. Hopefully these questions will beging to be answered in the next installment. Good work.
| Reviewed By: frannnnn On: February 24, 2010 19:22 EST
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please update soon! this is such a wonderful story!
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 04:03 EST
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one would imagine that if he knew of kagome and inuyasha, then possibly he knows of kouga's attitude and unsuitability to be the queen's consort. i wonder how you're going to have them pull off her saving and eventually marrying inuyasha. if it's not going to end happily, i would rather not read more (angst and sad endings aren't things i willingly read). =) ♥
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2010 16:18 EST
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one would think that her fiance would drop the engagement after seeing her kiss another so publicly. one would think that such scandalous actions would result in labeling her as a wanton, and him as a cuckold. i guess that meeting her in such a manner, he announced his intentions quite clearly. ♥
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2010 23:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I haven't seen Labyrinth in like forever, but I thought I recognized that song lyric, even before I checked your asterisk note at the bottom. I'm liking the beginning of this so far. Very suspenseful for a prologue. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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