| "Mystic Trainers" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: ruinmew On: July 15, 2004 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like, try to finish it
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Reviewed By: ChicaChi On: March 02, 2003 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fanfic, but I don't understand your grammer. To be plain honest, it sucks, a lot of it is in past present, and then in the same sentance, its present tense! It gets very confusing. But your story is very original. I think that its very hard to write a story when you have so many characters to develope. I thought that your best chapters were in the beginning, and that you need to explain more/better how the characters changed. But DON'T GIVE UP! WRITE THE REST!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 10:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good fanfic. It had a lot of action in it. You also had good spelling. Please finish! |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2002 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Misty doesn't deserve love, Ash, OR being in the presense of Jess, Jm, and Meowth. Baka, baka, baka! >__ |
Reviewed By: Blondie On: August 01, 2002 10:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh sorry I guessed I missed the AAML at the begining of the story!!!!!! (Man I feel stupid!!!!) HEHEHE ugh!!!!!!!! Well anyways keep writing!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Blondie On: August 01, 2002 10:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Come on FINISH!!!!!! I LOVE it!!!!!!1 Is there going to be any romance between Misty and Gary? PLEASE!!!!!!! Let there be or at least with Ash and Misty!!!!!!! i can't believe no one else has reviewed I personally think this story is really good!!!!!! Well don't let lackness of reviews stop you from writing!!! I LOVE your story so keep it up!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: Blondie On: July 30, 2002 10:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Finish darn it!!!!! i loved your story it was so creative it was almost scary!!!!! Well I've got to go but update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!! is Misty going to beat Ash? Oh PLEASE make this be a AAMLN or an GAMLN!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! G2G!!!!!! |
