"Deep Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Isaiah96 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2010 13:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: pardon my langueg but fuck the was hot it made me want to moan. you should totally write a part two cuz i want to read it thanks
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2010 18:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great story and lemon I love it keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 21:58 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I don't like it I LOVE IT!!!! I wish this was not a one shot. I would like to see what happens between Sesshomaru and Kagome the next day. Oh,thanks for punching Koga. I want to do it too.LOL :)
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 15:03 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Damn! that was hot! you should definitly continue this! it doesnt have to be a story but it can be a smut practice of sorts....because You totally have the talent to write amazing smut! also i want to know what happens once she wakes up ^_^ This was amazing!
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