Reviewed By: gelionlegends [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2010 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
just wondered if you could put up a small list at the either begining of the chapter or end with what certain names and code words mean, plus what crossovers of anime you are using as i can get some but not all of them like: MOH, SR, CGNN, DHY, TH, FSN, SAK, SC,BC, BR, HMT,YUA, ZKC. What are these? But over all i really liked it and myself want to see moreof what ranma gets up to and some lemon to. Plus what power does ranma have? Is he an alpha or an omega or are they not sure? Or because he needs some many limiters it brings him down to an alpha level, Plus he can't control his full power? Plus who is ranma the handler of and who is he getting next? Plus is setsuna part of ranma's harem or not? Are the next group he is getting some of the Scouts like the outers? That and are the girls conditioned in some way as how GSM reacted it seemed that they are? Is Mahourbo a part of the story line? Then is ranma really really short as it seems that way? I am surprised that you didn't include battle vixens and tenjou tenge as well. That and are the agents perminately handling these girls or after some time that they prove they can control their powers and themselves allowed to return toa semi normal life though remain on call? That and the scars ranma has how did he get them? And does he have a sister? Plus he wont be marrying a tendo will he?
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