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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2010 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...a whole slew of updates since the last time I was here. Goodie me! I love how this story is progressing and I am definitely looking forward to additional updates!
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2010 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story the plot is great and the story is hilarious at the same time.and Sesshoumaru threatening to dismember I think somebody's jealous. Keep up the good work ( Thanks for this fic you've out done yourself ) can't wait to read the next chapter
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2010 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL@dismembering - and thorough! Amber
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Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaahaaaa.! This is hilarious.! I really hope you update soon.!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2010 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, love the party scene. Wow, Sesshoumaru can feel guilt. I'm impressed. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: MidniteShadows [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lubs it :) I can't wait to see future updates!
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 22:49 CDT
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Oh My God! This was the longest and the best update yet! Keep it up! And hurry!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tsk-tsk...Sesshoumaru, if Kagome is just a toy to you, then why are you face deep in sake because she's been avoiding you? *sigh*... Anyway, great update, and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2010 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodie, two updates for the price of one. In chapter 18…first of all, Sesshoumaru, don't flatter yourself. How is Kagome stalking you if she didn't even know that was your apartment until Jakotsu just told her? Second, yes, you live on the 14th floor…and this would stop a youkai burglar because…? Hehehehe… And as for chapter 19… Doh! Kagome, you just blew it with that "too" at the end of that! LOL. Really great updates. Wish they were a tad longer, but eh…this story is still building and building, and keeping me interested, so you've got to be doing something right. :-)
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2010 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, Sesshoumaru actually has the ability to do something totally nice and sweet. Too bad he'll probably spoil it later by acting all smug about how she was clinging to him, LOL. I'm really, really liking this story. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2010 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you're just moving right along all of a sudden, not that I'm complaining! I love finding multiple updates! I'm glad Rin is going to be okay, and as for this latest chapter, LOL. I can just see Sesshoumaru suddenly dripping in champagne. Despite all the silliness, I get the feeling that slowly but surely, this story is going to progress and show its true colors. You've added the drama of Kagome's secret powers that are apparently very accurate, and the little mini-drama of Rin getting hurt which introduces her into the story as a means for Sesshoumaru to get Kagome to warm up to him...damn him, hehehe. But we already know that Kagome has had visions of golden eyes and whatnot in her future, I just hope that Sesshoumaru can actually manage to get serious one of these days. If I had somebody as annoying as that seemingly stalking me for my whole life...well, I don't know what I'd do, but Sesshoumaru needs a wake-up call. Maybe Kagome should get flamboyantly fed up to the point where she's supposedly fleeing town, and specifically for the purposes of ridding her life of Sesshoumaru's presence, and then fake her own death or something. He needs his arrogance taken down a few pegs, and realizing that his foolishness has caused Kagome actual harm would probably do it. Of course that's just the kind of demented things my twisted mind likes to come up with. This is your story and I eagerly await finding out what you have planned next!
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2010 19:04 CDT
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i love this story, but you've gotta make ur updates longer and quicker
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2010 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated, but we're still left with the mystery of the phone call! Though I'm sure Sesshoumaru used his excuse of walking away from Inuyasha in annoyance to actually go and look for Kagome, so hopefully we'll find out what's going on in the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Oooooh
Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2010 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you updated!!! Sessy is soo mean and I wonder who called...I cant wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, didn't see that coming. I totally thought her feeling of foreboding was just going to be over something extra embarassing Sesshoumaru was going to do to her at the reception. I wonder who called and what the problem is. Update soon!
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