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| "The Lolicon Collection" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: tokkafan4life's review
Reviewed By: tokkafan4life [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 08:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found the fanfiction to be very well written as well as descriptive. I also found it to be very sweet as well.I look forward to reading another master piece from this author.
| Reviewed By: Irivel On: February 28, 2010 08:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think you are great in every sense of the word. The plots are always new, you develope the stories in a very smooth way, you are a responsible author (you write loli, but you take your time to explain and in every chapter you left a note, just in case) I dont like adult/child stories, but i like yours, they are not offensive or brutal, they are nice and I always have in mind that its a ficctional storie (just like you said) so I don't feel offended in any way and I don't feel as if you were encouraging loli. Im glad you keep your stories in some place (here or in adultfanfiction) I hope to read more from you, you are a great author.
| Reviewed By: Koori On: February 27, 2010 19:54 PST
Comment/Review:
it makes me mad that now i have to go to a totally different site just to read one of my fav stories!!!! i'm still behind u please don't stop writing!
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