"The Road To Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: xDesire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2011 22:05 EST Comment/Review: Sorry guys, chapter 14 should be up now. Formatting is still messed up on here however. At least it's readable, the lack of separated paragraphs still bothers me... |
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2011 01:17 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I found a good story! Yay! By the way what is with chapter 14? There nothing on it. This story is going onto mu favorites. ^_^ |
Title: Error Reviewed By: Julietmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2011 23:04 EST Comment/Review: Your chapter Base Camp is not there all u get is the title then nothing. |
Title: Niiiiiiiiiiiiiccceee!!! Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2010 23:01 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is well written, and very creative. I look forward to what happens next. Please update soon, I hate being left hanging. You Rock!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2010 18:23 EDT Comment/Review: I am looking forward to the big battle, I hope it brings InuYasha and Sess even closer. I also hope that after the battle Inu & Kagome will be able to go back through the well so she can have a proper wedding.
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Title: Hi again xD Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2010 22:35 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!!! demons attacked the village!!! OMG!!! the lemon!!! OMG!!! you're fic it's great!!! I love it!!! and Kagome it's going to have a puppy!!! yeah!!! that's sooooo great xD I'll keep checking on you're fic xD
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2010 10:52 EDT Comment/Review: Nice ritual, nice lemon, both very well done. I'm really enjoying this story, and am glad I found it!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2010 17:23 EDT Comment/Review: Very nice story, well told. I look forward to more. A suggestion: Take out the authors notes and comments in the middle of the first couple of chapters, it makes for a jerky read. Other than that? Well done!
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Title: Hi Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2010 21:57 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Poor Jaken xD he most feel bad xD but well he's always yelling and stuff so I think he deserved that smaks that Sesshomaru gave him xD jijijiji... I'll keep cheking on you're fic xD byebye
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Title: Hi Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2010 23:18 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow!!! you wrote a lot while I didn't check xD jijijiji... well well but it was AWSOME!!! and the best part was the "under go-shimboku" jijijiji that was soooo kool xD and then the sits that kagome gave Inuyasha for mentioning again jijijiji well well i love you're fic xD i was soooo surprised that sesshomaru accepted Inuyasha but well I think well all guess he'd act a little like that after all at the end xD Well well i'll keep cheking on you're fic xD take care!!! good luck xD
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Title: Hi Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2010 20:44 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow I love you're fic!!! it's great!!! well a little extreme in the part that if Inuyasha doesn't mate kagome she'll die xD bue apart from that it's kool and i mean they have to have a reason jijijijijjiji soooooooooo great i love it, i'll be waiting for you to update xD byebye
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Reviewed By: KiobitoSama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2010 14:08 EST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Loved the chapters Loving the story. i will be waiting for the next chapter for this great story. KUDOS!!
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