| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: MoonKnightess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2011 09:31 EDT
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I love your stories, and I have you on my author alert list- But, I am dismayed to see that you have not updated for almost a year! I would dearly love to see you update soon! |
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2010 02:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like what you have so far I hope to see more soon
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Reviewed By: KEdakumi On: March 10, 2010 21:23 EST
Comment/Review:
This is a great start. I can't wait until the next chapter. Only two things made it a bit difficult to read. One was how several words blend together in the sentences. I had to reread a few sentences to understand the meaning. The other thing is how you have to have a map key in order to tell who's thinking what. For me, that interrupted the flow of the story. Just some thoughts. Can't wait to see where this goes.
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Reviewed By: Kita Tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2010 09:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really enjoyed this first chapter. It's a sort of nice introduction to the situation and what-not. Anyway, I love Hiei
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