| "The Love of a Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2010 03:28 CDT
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To other reviewers: Chapter 7 can be found on FanFiction.Net where "The Love of a Hanyou" is also posted but the author name is different. On that site "Danita-Kiara" goes by "kiaraj".
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 07:41 CDT
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Great beginning, I got really into it. Although with the spacing the dialogue gets a little confusing. Oh and as of right I am going to assume until you correct us; that Shessy told Inu he'd accept him as family only if they had hot yaoi sex. There thats what happened. ok jk but seriously I went back and forth between the two chapters about five times before I just figured out that it wasn't my Mac or the server. Arigato and Ja ne~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 11:33 CDT
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what happend in sesshomaru house? 7 and 8 same chap
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story. Can't wait for next update.
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2010 23:29 CDT
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I love the story so far, but can you please correct chapter 7? in case you hadn't noticed already, it's the exact same thing as chapter 8 and, so, there is a giant gap in the story line. thank you in advance, and i'll be sure to finish reading your story as soon as you sort it out. you are doing a wonderful job right now.
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