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"Steps Through Eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 19, 2010 05:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for your comment, i really appreciated it. Yes, i'm a newbie in this writing fanfiction business, so yeah, my story still needs lots of work on it, and i will try my best to improve my writing skills. Again, thanks for your helpful comments. \/^.^\/
 Reviewed By: Twillightfairy [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 17, 2010 20:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like what you've got going here. I have a slight problem with your writing tense, however this is something you need to learn to correct yourself. I want to see what comes next in this story.

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