Reviewed By: rubytwili18 On: December 17, 2011 21:44 EST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: It was a very cute and well planned story. I am sorry to say though that the grammar and spelling was quite horrid. I am not flaming you, just a little criticism. If the grammar was cleaned up this would be a perfect story.