| "My Rapist's Brother" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: kawaii_tori [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2010 04:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there :) i really like your story..but honestly i really hate sango and ayame in this fanfic..what they do is just stupid and not fair..-.- can't wait to read the next chapter..so please upload it as soon as possible..:):) |
Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2010 20:36 EST
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Wow, this story is really good! Keep up the awesome work adn update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next! |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2010 19:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome is okay... but looks like her and inuyasha are doing so well... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! |
Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2010 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fucking Ayame. I hate her in this fic. ~_~ Poor Kagome.
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa this story is intense and gripping.love it keep up the good work...LOL THANK YOU
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Title: aww
Reviewed By: watersongs [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2010 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
iM SO CONFUSED. BUT THE END WAS SOOO CUTE I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE!
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Reviewed By: WyckedFrankie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2010 05:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry but your story isn't realistic and you are not consistent. You kept changing Yuri to Yura and Yuka and in real life, the doctors would have given Kagome the plan b pill and she wouldn't be pregnant. I read all that you have to give you a chance but the story isn't as great as the summary you put together to get readers' attention.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2010 02:23 EDT
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Great so far but, can you please pick one name to stick to for Yuri, Yuka, Yura it was confusing trying to keep up. and there are some spelling and grammar mistakes that i saw. If you'd like i'll copy them and and edit them to remove the errors and send it back your way. anyway thank you. ja ne~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Kagome-tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 03:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story so far, but... I just have one thing that was really bugging me. Wasn't Kagome suspended to? Or what happened with that? Other than that, the story is good and enjoyable. Rather creative, I can't say I've read any other stories close to this one. :) Keep writing and improving. I can't wait to see where the story goes.
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Title: Keep going
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2010 14:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, I just read through your fanfic. I liked it a lot. Keep up the great work. I will wait for the next chapters willingly. Its a great idea to work off of. Just keep up the good work. Its Great. Ok later.
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