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| "Forget-Me-Not" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: March 24, 2010 11:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooh yes! those few little changes helped, it flows a bit better this way. I like it!
| Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: March 23, 2010 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
;_; I am crying SO hard right now you have no idea. Oh that was sooo sad! Normally I skip Mpreg's because I hate how they are written, but I had to give it a chance since you wrote it, and WOW I can't remember the last time a fic made me cry like this! Poor Aya, I just want to cuddle him right now, even if I'd probably be death glared and possibly stabbed for it. *huggles Aya anyway* You really wrote this beautifully I like how your style has changed.
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