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| "Invisible Magic" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: ScifiAmy (too lazy to sign in) On: April 22, 2010 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
A few spelling errors but otherwise the story was amazing. loved it!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this one. Even though the whole "she's in heat and it's hard for him to control himself" bit has been used before, it's usually the premise for a PWP, so I really liked that you had them calm down and realize that they should wait until she's not "in heat" so that she won't get pregnant. I've also never really seen the whole "sex ed" deal with Shippou before, and Kagome forcing Inuyasha to help her with that conversation was down right hilarious. Definitely unique. Well done!
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