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| "To Tell The Truth..." Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Reviewed By: Reader in Disguise On: September 28, 2011 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no idea how I could miss this little jewel the first time, but boy! Am I glad I found it this time! Keeping up with your amazing talent as a writer, you managed to (Again) bring a HUGE smile to my face! I loved the whole idea of the truth tea! Very original and it made for some really amazing moments! Thank you for continuing to share that great gift that you have, it does make a difference to some of us! | Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2011 16:35 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2011 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.animara.org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-association.deviantart.com/blog/40025885/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/FanFic%20March%2 02011/ Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.animara.org/pickup_site.php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2011 07:19 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanfiction (Fiction) http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanart (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. | Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2010 10:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesomwe. the best part is Kagome finally gets Inuyasha..Thanks KEEP UP THE GOOD WOrK
| Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2010 23:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this one. I loved the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha while they were under the influence of the truth potion. Finally they were forced to discuss everything honestly. They were really able to clear up some misunderstandings. And I have to admit, I liked this version of Kikyou. Usually I can't stand her but you wrote her in a way that I actually liked. Of course, she was allowing Inuyasha and Kagome to be together. And Shippou forcing Kagome to answer those questions was great, Inuyasha really needed to learn where she was coming from. And while I'm sure that Miroku would answer certain questions without the tea, maybe Sango could use a dose. Of course I'm sure she would just whack him over the head with Hiraikotsu before he could hear her answer. Great job.
| Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2010 12:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome as always!
| Title: Location
Reviewed By: ImayhaveaName On: April 13, 2010 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. Well i have been an avid reader and rereader of your fictions for a very long time...but i am confused. Why do you insist on writing on Mediaminer.org...i have not seen your profile on fanfiction.net which is a much larger and more used website.
| Reviewed By: Wowzer313 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2010 22:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've been gone from the Fanfiction world for a little while, but this story was definitely something nice to come back to! I like the line "It was so difficult, being a creature borne of evil while still possessing a fundamental knowledge of right and wrong."--So awesome, and nicely done with the repetition. One of my other favorite parts was when Kagome asked Inuyasha how he really felt about his brother...it's funny that this is included in this story, because I've been playing around with a story concerning this relationship, and how it came to be what it is. Anyway, nicely done :) Thanks for the nice read before bed! -Wowzer313
| Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 23:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really enjoyed this!! I thought it was very well written and I was excited when I saw you submitted something new. n_n I was kinda surprised when Inuyasha took the tea as well, but I was thinking it would be fun to see how he acted under it's influence. I really enjoyed the entire story and I can't wait for the next one!
| Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 20:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! you're fic it's soooooooo great!!! I love the way you write xD it's just amazing!!! always with a lot of feeling involved... and I LOVED the idea of the truth tea... I mean... not being able to lie... it's was amazing... and also the fact that Inuyasha made SO clear to kagome the fact that his vow for Kikyo was just because of his honor... and one thing... I mean... in a lot of places I've read about the "vow" but... Inuyasha never really "vowed" to kikyo to go to hell with her... he told her he wanted to help her... to be with her... he promised to protect her... but he never told her "I'll go to her with you" face to face... even tough he told Kaede that way... he never told Kikyo xD I just had that question xD about "the vow" xD Ohhhh and the rest of the fic!!! sooo full with sweet feeling and confessions and cute stuff... oh!!! the when Kagome said Inuyasha's ears were cute xD jijijiji all you're fic was exactly what I've been waiting for in this days xD Sorry if i write too much xD I'm still a little sad about the fact that Inuyasha it's finished xD Well welll you just keep writing cus you do it GREAT xD the best wishes for you and tons of luck xD take care!!! xD till you're next fic xD byebye Eiko007 Inuyasha&Kagome together for ever
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 19:03 EDT
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I like the way you worked this. Though IY taking the tea was a surprise! You just know if the two of them will quit getting in their own way and TALK, things would be wonderful. Here, it happens, so thank you!
| Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how you treated the whole Kikyou/Kagome/Inuyasha conundrum. Original, and true to canon personalities. As for canon... well, we all know how Kikyou passed in the anime/manga - so this story would just be considered a divergence is all. Creative license, baby! Amber
| Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 17:40 EDT
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The whole 20 questions thing in the beginning was very entertaining, how Inuyasha slowly moves to more and more personal questions, learning things about how Kagome sees him along the way. I would have loved to see Miroku asking her perverted questions, but you're right, Inuyasha would have murdered him. Either that or he would have been all ears for her response! :-) Just a small critique: when Kagome is forced to tell the reptile youkai where the shards are, and Inuyasha yells "damn it all!" it seemed kind of odd that she would drop down on the ground and cry. I would have pictured her maybe telling Inuyasha off a little bit, like "hey, it's not my fault!" Maybe that's just me? *shrugs* I sometimes catch myself doing that with Kagome, making her cry in situations where she probably wouldn't. Anyway, just a little thing. Oh, Shippo, Shippo, Shippo, I should have known the little fox would be the one to ask the tough questions! I really like Kikyou's scene; I've always had a thing for a bitter-yet-compassionate Kikyou. "It was so difficult, being a creature born of evil, while still possessing a fundamental knowledge of right and wrong." You have no idea how much I loved that line. I'm not surprised Inu decided to take the truth potion too. Better to swallow that than his own foot, I suppose. A nice moment of humor with Miroku's "test" question, and Inuyasha's running away and grumbling about it afterwards. And where the hell did you get "grasshopper anus?" LOL! In chapter 2, it was so bizarre to see Inuyasha and Kagome being so open and honest with each other. Interesting characterization of Inuyasha's hanyou-related fears, and his ideas about physical relationships. The lemon was kind of odd in the same way; normally I would consider that much talking OOC! But that's the beauty of the truth potion. I think you could have done without the epilogue, but it wasn't bad or anything. I'm just saying the story would have been fine without it. Purely a matter of author's choice. Overall, this was a fun little story.
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