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Reviewed By: darkangelgirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2011 14:22 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10

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This chapter was excellent. John being the way he is with Sam. It was sad the way he felt about Sam. I'm glad that they agreed to be a family again. To help protect Sam and that is what it is in way protect Sammy from what is out there. Sam jumping in front that girl was wonderful. He would do that. John's shock was well written, and Dean demanding his gun in thinking he might hurt Sam was that protective brother instints again. John loves both his boys, would do anything for them, which is shown here.

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