| "It's Time I Cared" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Guan Long The Insane Fan of Bardock [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 20:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
What the Heak!?! that would freak me out! Aww...I love the ending.
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Reviewed By: MS [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 07:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! I liked it alot. And he didn't say it in the end, which made it more ... interesting. MajinSakuko (somehow it doesn't work to give an inlogged review)
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Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2002 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very unique fan fic, I really enjoyed it. |
Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was really good. I'm just a sucker for romance lol :) |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 15:24 CDT
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that must have been one hell of a dream *shudder* yes it does make a GREAT fic though :) |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
AAAaawwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!
I like! |
Reviewed By: ChiChi_Joey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... that was an awesome fic!! I was totally enraptured the entire time! I love the romantic stuff! Good job!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 13:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! I managed to get on! But no time for AOL just yet. I actually came on to post a chapter of AUL, and saw you had posted a new fic and read it.
Now, about your story... That's freaky! But it makes for an awesome story. It was a bit confusing, like, how did the books get there? How did his future self get there? But it was still awesome. ^_^ And the ending:
“Vegeta... Vegeta, what’s wrong?” she asked, her voice filled with confusion at his sudden change in heart.
“Absolutely nothing.” Turning her to face him, he planted a deep kiss on her soft lips and turned out the light.
Ah man, that was perfect. An excellent ending! Another fic that puts me to shame.
Hopefully I'll talk to you later.
~V Gyal~ |
