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"A Damaged Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ]
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 Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2010 12:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha and Kagome, but don't have Inu go back to being a hanyou. He should have to earn her trust and love back!
 Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2010 12:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
DEFIANTLY KAGOME AND SESSHOMARU..... Yahsa had his chance and he blew it. Like he said "a few weeks ago, I stood and watched it being taken from her without giving a shit." So I whole hearted believe that it should be Sesshomaru and Kagome
 Reviewed By: kysha82 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2010 06:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
i/k
 Reviewed By: Josiln Stafford  On: May 07, 2010 22:41 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like a Kagome/Inuyasha pairing but i want him to earn her forgiveness. Let him show her how much she means to him
 Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 07, 2010 22:19 PDT
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I still say Demon Inuyasha out to have a fair shot at making up for what he did as a hanyou... it is my firm belief that the demon is much smarter than he is ever portrayed as and would never hurt Kagome (this smarter half of him recognizes her as his mate of course). Sesshomaru doesn't really seem to fit right for a romantic interest as of right now, so if he wins you'll really have to work on that relationship. Right now he seems to be acting more like a protective big brother than a romantic interest for Kagome. So my vote is that Demon Inuyasha (not hanyou and not human) is the one to be with Kagome. Ultimately its up to you, and I'm sure I will enjoy the story no matter the pairing.
 Reviewed By: uu  On: May 07, 2010 22:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
inu and kag
 Reviewed By: Beautifully_broken91 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 07, 2010 21:41 PDT
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha and Kagome!
 Reviewed By: Athean  On: May 07, 2010 19:47 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I would give a higher rating than a 10 but alas I can not. Why not have Kagome with both Inuyasha and Sess. You have the foundations laid for that type of plot. Kagome trust Sess to be there for her and protect her. Also she does not quite trust Inu as much, but she still has feelings for him. It would take some major time for Kagome to trust in Inu again. I think if you decided to with either Inu or Sessh it still would be a wonderful story. Your the author of this awesome story, so it all up to you to decide.
 Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 07, 2010 18:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
Well, as I've said, I'm a true-blue Inu/Kag fan. Besides, he's already bonded his blood with hers, now. I think when she figures that out, she'll realize just how dedicated he is. Human emotions can make people stupid, after all. Inuyasha said it himself. It seems Shippo and Sesshoumaru still trust him, as well.
 Title: Whp i think kagome should be paired with
Reviewed By: catpanther [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 07, 2010 18:42 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think that kagome should be paired with inuyasha the main reason i say that is because inuyasha is hurtting and needs her while though sesshomoru seems to be likeing her i would think it best if he and her not be together. they seem to different plue i like reading about inuyasha and kagome more then sesshomaru.
 Reviewed By: Spang1993  On: May 07, 2010 17:42 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
INUYASH! After some serious butt kissing, of course.
 Reviewed By: not signed in and can't remember the password  On: May 07, 2010 16:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
POLYANDRY! or I/K!
 Reviewed By: bettychan  On: May 05, 2010 23:24 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think I'd like this to be an Inuyasha/Kagome pairing. But only after hanyou Inuyasha does some major groveling. And I do mean major. He has a lot to make up for. But on the other hand, a Sesshoumaru/Kagome pairing would serve Inuyasha right. He did betray her in the most heinous way after all. This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I love the suspense you're building. I also love your characterizations. When Sango got mad and yelled at Inuyasha, I could feel her rage. I can feel Kagome's pain too. Very good writing there. Hope you do well on your exams and update as soon as you can.
 Title: dun dun dun!
Reviewed By: inu_slayer078  On: May 05, 2010 20:30 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love the cliffhanger and i can't wait to read more! :D so amazing girl, keep up the good work! (i'm still crossing my fringers for InuKag, but i love sesshy too.)
 Reviewed By: tims_girl_ashley [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2010 11:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
continue as quickly as possible.... i cant wait to c what happens next
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