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| "Yolks On Me" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: ilona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2010 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! i noticed that it was market "complete" but it only feels like the start of a story instead of just a one-shot! it would be the greatest thing if you would continue it! this sounds so cute and holds many promises about turning into an excellent story!!! thank you for sharing this with us!! ^^
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2010 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, this is cute. I must admit I am curious, what with his silver streaks and amber flecks in the eyes, is he supposed to be half demon in disguise, or did you just color him exotically for the fun of it? This one-shot does kind of read like a prologue, so if you wanted to continue with this universe, I would definitely be interested in reading more. I get the feel that additional chapters could be additional, random glimpses into their lives, and not necessarily a continuation story that takes us from one day to the next. Like the next chapter could start with her saying how she'd 'thought' that was the most embarrassing moment of her life, until the day 'this' happened...fill in the blank with whatever you want. :-)
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