| "Of Trust and Time" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2011 11:57 EDT
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That was great and made wonderful sense. The fact that she trusts him ENOUGH to go to her home and her family. |
Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2010 15:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a beautiful story I love it
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 07:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
That was really nice. I enjoyed it!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really good, I would have loved reading her reaction to that kiss but other than that this was perfect..oh and I really admire Miroku and his good comman sense. Yay for best friends,understandings and kisses :D
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 21:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this piece, even though I usually skip over the movie storylines as if they never happened (though that's only 'cause I like doing 'first' kiss scenes). But I've seen a lot of people comment offhandedly, and I know I'm guilty of the same, in regard to not knowing why Inuyasha can travel through the well, and hypothesizing that it's because he's connected to the Goshinboku itself in some way from having been sealed to it for so long. But in all actuality, I think the beads are a much more logical guess. They do tie Kagome and Inuyasha together, since they are linked to her command, and it very damn well could be because of the beads that he's able to travel through to her time. I've also seen the 'trust' issues brought up before in several different ways, but I think this is the first piece I've ever seen actually bring to light the fact that she trusts him with her family, because of his ability to go through the well, which she is not worried about. That was a wonderful point to add on top of everything else. Well done!
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