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Title: Interesting!
Reviewed By: Az On: September 06, 2010 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually read this without looking at the characters, I was pretty convinced that it was Sesshoumaru. *snicker* I love that last line. I'm such a sucker for punch lines. I wonder what they will do now? Will there be light eventually? Will Kagome be able to see Inuyasha? He's being really accommodating all considering seeing as he didn't kill her off right away. Oh you and your plot bunnies! I really liked the suspense in this story. Lots of questions, lots left to the imagination. Well done. Thank you for the little bit. Hope to see more of your writing later!
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Title: wth?!
Reviewed By: Angry_Reviewer On: August 17, 2010 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story Strength of a Bond.... If only you would finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!! What's going on here?! I thought I would die when I saw it was incomplete. I see you're still alive, after all, this story was written earlier this year, so I remain confused as to why you never finished that story.... Confused and hurt. V_V
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Title: PLEASE!
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2010 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS.... PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: April 27, 2010 11:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Can there be just one more chapter please? At least to explain some things, like if Inuyasha is kept hidden away how did he learn to speak, and why hasn't he tried to bust out of there.
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Title: PLEASE!
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69(nsi) On: April 26, 2010 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS.... PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Kirara_Cutie316 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2010 22:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
i completely agree with splendentgoddess! 100% please please please consider expanding this story!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2010 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Crazy cool! I don't want this to just be a one-shot. We don't need to go into a whole to-do of ten or twenty chapters, but at least one or two more would be awesome. So many mysteries surrounding the universe you have created. Inuyasha is clearly his usual hanyou self (more or less), but is this a universe in which youkai are known about by the public? It didn't seem that way from Kagome's reaction, not realizing he was youkai in so many words. And how does Inuyasha feel about being that company's secret monster, living in a smelly dungeon and told to slaughter whomever gets tossed in there? Why not kill her if that's all he does? First time he got a woman? He was drawn to her scent? And with the bite, is she his bonded mate now? Oooo, so many unanswered questions!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2010 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
very nice detail and descriptions-- wow, it would make a really great intro into a longer story. =D i like the fact that inuyasha is very articulate. ♥
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