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| "On A Summer's Afternoon" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: WOW
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2010 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written and keeping the characters personalities intact with of course both doing things that both wouldn't do so easily in the real story line! Great job! Please write more, try Shinji with BOTH Rei & Asuka!
| Title: Chapters 1-4
Reviewed By: Archdruid Sephiroth On: May 06, 2010 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll admit that I can be a bit of a perv when it comes to stories like these, but most of the ones here are either too raunchy or too unbelievable. This was no less unbelievable but you have to suspend some belief to enjoy this stuff. I digress of course. This one seemed more plausible considering Rei's unusual persona. She's my favorite character. I usually prefer Yuri/Shoujo Ai (probably spelled it wrong) but SxR fics always catch my attention anyway because they seem so perfect together. I really enjoyed this one so far and I hope you add more chapters to it... in other words.... "MOAR!" The amount of awesome is insufficient to meet my daily requirements. Please write more.
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