Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2010 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is rated wrong, and I don't want you to get in trouble. I wasn't expecting a lemon; it needs to be labeled hentai, and you should probably also bump up the rating from Y to X. That being said, I'm not personally offended, because I love lemons. The way this was written, it makes me wonder if you have personal experience with an alcoholic. Someone not in the know could argue, what's so wrong with Inuyasha wanting to have a beer or two? What's Kagome's problem? But we were privy to a scene in which he apparently wasn't that bad, and she was relieved, letting me know it's often times worse. And if they can't even say "I love you" to each other, then there are definitively problems. Very well done! Please hurry and ad hentai to the genre list, because like I said, I don't want you to get in trouble.
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