| "Is There A Written Path To Love?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Is There A Written Path To Love?
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 11:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel or something please?
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Reviewed By: no name hee On: April 02, 2003 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good finish it finish it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ohmygodimblonde [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a good story!!!!! I really want to know what happens next! I can't believe that Katy and Andrew died! But I guess Serena and Darien were just meant to be together! I will be cheking for up-dates or maybe a new chapter! |
Reviewed By: Eo On: June 10, 2002 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off i finally finished and i read it straight through with out n e stops. I really love the story and i would love to read more but to do that u would have to up date. Well i'll be checking for up dates. Eo |
Reviewed By: Silver Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2001 14:11 CST
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the story. As for what the other person said, everyone has grammatical errors, so don't take that to heart.
Some parts of the plot were original, I mean almost all the fanfics have serena having the child she created with Darien.
So, keep up the work, i know even for my own fics, that practice makes perfect, and man, i'm probably far from perfect.
So, keep up the work, because I enjoyed it! |
Reviewed By: Dianna Silver On: October 16, 2001 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have one major suggestion. Well, two, actually. The first one is that all sentences end with punctuation, be they exclamation points, question marks or periods, and they get only one mark save for an ellipse. I didn't see a single period through your text, and there were sentences with an overabundance of punctuation.
You may think it's a nitpick, but until someone can get the basics down of Englsh prose, it's hard to take a story seriously.
The second suggestion is to make sure spelling is as up to snuff as possible, especially the names of the characters. Again it's hard to take a story seriously when the author forgets how the character's name is spelled.
Otherwise, you have a halfway decent story. It's average as far as style and ideas go--about what I expect from the Sailor Moon genre--but it's not crap either. Just brush up on your technical writing. |
