Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2010 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, interesting so far, but where is this story going? I know it's a story challenge so you already know the conclusion at some point, but this is a valid point, so where does it go? For that matter, is this before the Ori, or does that even happen (it's non-canon to most fans of the series afterall). In any case, continue to update will ya? Ja ne.
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