| "Beautiful: An Adventure in Parenthood" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Arigatou Gozaimasu
Reviewed By: kimakaanna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2010 23:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww the ending was so sweet! I absolutely love your style of writing. You aren't afraid to cross boundaries and you think outside of the box. You're a one of a kind author and I'm glad that I had the chance to sample your amazing gift ;) Good luck with the moving and such. Moving can be such a hassle, though lol |
Reviewed By: kmn1829 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 11:35 EDT
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i love this story nd im begging tht u upload more chapters pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i luv wen a story has the talent to become a great long story. please this story can become great if u jus continue writing i read ur other stories nd ur a great writer so please dont stop.
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2010 13:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hi! I think I read most of this on another site, but I just wanted to let you know how much I love this story and your excellent writing style. Hope to see more chapters soon!
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Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2010 11:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no clue why people are not reviewing this wonderful story! I adore the Rin/Sesh pairing and I feel that you have done a good job of portraying Rin. I do think Seshomaru could show a little more distance or coldness to others who encounter him, and I mean for example, conversations he has with others. Seshomaru doesn't neccesarily have to kill anyone to shut them down and assert his bad-assery :) But this is just my opinion, keep up the great work I look forward to your next installment. Can't wait to see more mom-son bonding between Rin and pup!
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