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"Our Games" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ]
 Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy  On: November 25, 2010 12:29 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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No, Aya is most definitely NOT fine. but wow, way to go confrontation! I wanna know what happens next.
 Reviewed By: ObsidianButterfly [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 25, 2010 22:37 EDT
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Follow the white rabbit! I am!
 Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy  On: June 24, 2010 11:31 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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wow Yohji almost seems to be getting in over his head. I wonder how Aya will react if he finds out what he did. I see dismemberment in the future...or hot sex... possibly both. here's some carrots, keep following that bunny!
 Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy  On: June 15, 2010 18:41 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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YES! Follow him! and tempt him with carrots. garden greens and tea too! don't let him get away I love this story to pieces!!!
 Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy  On: May 31, 2010 16:15 EDT
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'm interested! I am definitely interested and wanna see what happens next! Breed little bunnies breed! inspire her to write!!!
 Reviewed By: anonym724  On: May 26, 2010 22:08 EDT
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I think that learning about a person through the little details they leave behind is always an interesting journey, but it makes it all the more painful whenever something is discovered that is so secret and private and dark. For me, you expressed that point really clearly. However, I think that Aya would've been more meticulous with something that deep and dark. Like, he definitely wouldn't have wanted all the blow-up if somebody found out (and with all his stuff being moved around, he should've known that somebody was rooting through his belongings). Unless he was, in some weird, passive way, asking for help???
 Reviewed By: Degenerate  On: May 24, 2010 00:23 EDT
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Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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I vote for more! Please! I want to knowww!!
 Reviewed By: Cody Thomas The Sleepy  On: May 23, 2010 12:24 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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This is quite dark...and I think I'm in love with it a little. I would like to read more if the Bunny sticks around to nibble at you. Yohji really is learning a lot, the good and the bad. ooooh ok yes I really do want to read more!

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