Reviewed By: randomfanficfan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2010 13:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello there it seems that you have a really interesting story going around here. but in my opinion Sesshomaru doesn't really fit this part, it really really seems out of place to me. I honestly believe that his part would work better with Inuyahsa. This may just be me, but if you're really trying to make this a Sesshomaru/Kagome I would consider revising. Cause honestly I thought in the first chapter that he was Inuyasha, so the next chapter kind of put me off...
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