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| "The Alpha and the Daiyoukai" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Stripedpants On: May 06, 2012 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the story and I also am glad you didn't go the mpreg route. I would however be overjoyed if you were to write a continuation where Miroku was the uke. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2012 16:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, good conclusion! This is such a cute (if you can call something totally raunchy and smutty 'cute') little story, LOL. Thank you for not turning it into an 'mpreg'. I guess I can understand (not really, but okay) the attraction of pairing say...Inu and Sess...and making up some crap about how Inuyasha can develop internal female organs that enable him to get pregnant, because he's an 'uke' as if that's actually a species, and yeah they did the whole swap-gender thing in Jurassic Park because some frogs somewhere do it in real life and so therefore inu-youkai can do it too, completely disregarding the fact that youkai magic or no, he turns human once a month and would therefore never be able to get pregnant for that reason alone at the very least because *human* men can definitely not change gender, but I digress! Reading a normal gay porn without it getting scientifically impossible is refreshing, so thank you! LOL, :-) | Reviewed By: harukatenohu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2011 10:10 EST
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i would love if you countinuet this story an making it a mpreg would be great | Reviewed By: jennifer polite On: July 08, 2010 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is varry good and the wrighting is simpile and good to read i hop it to be finch soon
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