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Reviewed By: TeardropCrystal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2010 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was HOT! I'm so glad you're continuing to write. Please continue to do so.
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Reviewed By: Solin60 On: September 10, 2010 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have the best fantasies :) Ever! Thanks for sharing them with us. Oh my God Vegeta, why can't you be real????
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Reviewed By: pisq On: September 07, 2010 12:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was intense...Vegeta is not the death of her, he's just the thing she needs to live.
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Reviewed By: xaverri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2010 06:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful :) Ugh, sex in the clouds with a thunderstorm around you... Can I say; most intense fantasy ever? Thank you for the read :)
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Title: holy fuck
Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2010 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh GOD, please let there be more. Like Yamcha getting pissed, and then Vegeta and Bulma fighting, which leads to hot hot HOT make up sex, which I know will be fucking epic. This story rocks. I'm swooning, I swear I just felt a bout of Vertigo.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2010 20:34 EDT
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X3 Ah I love it! A wonderful ending (though I won't complain if you write anymore ;D) Great story as always.
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 12:57 EDT
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Please update soon! This story is way to hot to end like this!!!! ¢¾
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Reviewed By: jenniferwl On: July 10, 2010 07:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was awesome...:) YOu have fueled my fantasies! Love Vegeta!
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2010 10:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I reviewed over at ff.net and now I'm doing it here! I simply love this fic - how you write B&V is so awesome!!! Please continue. I cannot get enough!!!
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Reviewed By: j. On: July 09, 2010 08:37 EDT
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hehe, i think part of the allure with affairs is the danger involved :/. its hott;) (so are balconies!!)
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Reviewed By: j. On: July 09, 2010 08:28 EDT
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LOL @mrs hunt!!!! great one shot!!! i love ur stuff!!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: July 04, 2010 11:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
Another great piece!!!!! How can Bulma live without this gorgeous man?
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Reviewed By: xsimplyrue On: July 04, 2010 00:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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All I can say is that I really hope you continue this. It's great so far, and not just because of the dirty scenes. You really put emotion into the dialogue and make it a worthwhile read. Keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 21:15 EDT
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I'm so glad you continued it. It's sad that Bulma is letting her safe life overrule her wants. I wonder how Vegeta takes the fact that Bulma chooses to stay with Yamcha of being with him. Yes he knows that she wants him but the fact that she keeps insisting that staying with Yamcha has a point must be driving him crazy, especially since Vegeta's desire for Bulma doesn't seem to be decreasing. Another hot and steamy chapter. Great as always.
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Reviewed By: anushka On: July 01, 2010 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I think this hot V/B one-shots are my favourite! You write them so well, clever and simple but so entertaing with so much good V/b action! They are just hot hot :)
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