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| "Nine Tailed Mutant Legend" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: RaphaelTMNT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 14:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the critique, I'll improve on it as I go forward with later chapters:)
| Reviewed By: alyssa james [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You definitely have an interesting concept going. I truly didn't think a combination like this would work, but it works pretty well. There is one thing I'm going to say for constructive critisism: Try to proofread your story/chapter before adding it. Sometimes I get the feeling that the meaning you're going for is lost because of the mistakes in grammar. The story would be close to perfect if you did that. Now, you don't have to take my advice; that's why it's constructive critisism. I hope, however, that you continue writing this story, as I am interested in what will happen next. ~Peace~
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