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| "The Afterlife's Precipice" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: chibimars On: June 11, 2010 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic job! I wasn't expecting the ending!
| Reviewed By: secret35 On: June 11, 2010 12:42 CDT
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WOW. this was an intence story all the way through im still on the edge of my seat... congrgulations this was possibly one of the best one shots so far, incrediable simply incrediable. I would have loved it even more if this became a full length story...u know just sayin XD
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2010 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you, LOL. I don't like angst, but only because I don't like being sad. If I had known this was going to have a sad ending I wouldn't have read it...but, as a story, as a writer, both it and you did a wonderful job. You made me cry...damn it, LOL. But so that means that as a writer, you know what you're doing. Especially for your first one-shot. Well done!
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