"Twisted Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: jwjwwlq On: November 02, 2010 12:49 CDT Comment/Review: Hey, im kags521 and I really hope you update soon on your story. I really like it.
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Reviewed By: GLily On: October 19, 2010 21:31 CDT Comment/Review: Yayyy!!! Another chapter! :-D Your writing style is incredibly unique, as is the story plot. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2010 19:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay! Finally an update! Wow, kudos to your imagination. I can't wait till the next installment!!!
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Title: wow Reviewed By: huntressbella [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2010 09:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story so far is amazing. Please continue it =). I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2010 22:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I am extremely enjoying this story. It is very original, and the writing is well done! Please continue to update frequently! I look forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: GLily On: September 20, 2010 20:09 CDT Comment/Review: Omg!! I just finished the chapter (reviewed prematurely before) and what a cliffy! Please please please update soon. I am dieing to read how you go about explaining Kagome being alive and how the story plays out from here.
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Reviewed By: GLily On: September 20, 2010 19:21 CDT Comment/Review: I love the story, but am a little saddened that you say you won't be updating for a while... *pouts* Constructive critisism: In chapter 2, Aneko commented about Kagome being born with the jewel and as such having a natural abhorrence to foolish wishes, but in chapter 3, it is Kagome telling Aneko that in a way that makes it sound like it is her idea... Other than that, I love it! Please don't keep us waiting too long.
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2010 09:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like the beginning of this story! You should continue it. Your writing style is smooth and flows exceptionally well. Your first chapter has set the stage for a wonderfully epic story!
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