Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: January 06, 2011 09:16 EST Comment/Review: I've only read a few chapters of this, but it already seems that you've made Kagome into a mary sue. Her power is bigger and better and stronger and prettier and and and.
Reviewed By:DemanFox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2010 16:26 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I'll really like this story I hope that you make a sequal to it or contine it. Its one of the few good storys that I have read in a long time.