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| "Inuyasha gone succy" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2010 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Caught between a wall and a 'hard place', eh? Cute line, LOL. Really loved the final chapter. I love the difference portrayed in that even though he sort of lost it and went youkai again the second time around, he was still in control of himself, because it was truly the demon bitch's poison that had made him act that way the first time. And right out on the patio? LOL! The walls are paper thin! Literally! Oh well, at least it looks like they didn't get caught, haha. Wonderful job!
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2010 05:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2010 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow...I love that sort-of twist at the end there. I hadn't made a connection to any kind of toxin affecting him; I thought it was going to be cliché hanyou-gone-youkai. Love the reference to the second movie. Love the whole third chapter, even though it's a shortie. Looking forward to how you conclude, or merely continue on with, this story. Whatever your muse decides.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2010 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Either way is fine with me, a fourth chapter or a long-ass third chapter. Yes, I get the distinct impression primal-yasha might not be too gentle with Kagome, but he would never intentionally hurt her, and I doubt she'll resist all that much. The true angst in that type of situation usually revolves around Inuyasha's guilt once he comes to. Really looking forward to seeing what you have in mind!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2010 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo, good beginning! Really looking forward to reading the rest of it.
| Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2010 01:13 CDT
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i like the story so far, cant wait for the update ^_^
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