| "A Silent Affair" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: plz!
Reviewed By: Megan_T On: November 07, 2010 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please! update soon! I am so getting into this, this is totally original and I am enjoying it alot. Keep up the good work :)
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2010 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute story and well written. Can't wait to see how Inu proposes =)
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Reviewed By: kmn1829 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2010 15:38 CDT
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When are you going to update again? Does Sesshomaru know Kagome is back? Did they see each other? Will you put him in the story more? Is he more forthcoming with his emotions when it comes to Kagome? Did she manage to sneak a way into his heart as a sister? Will Sango be in the story because of Miroku? Will Shippou be in the story? Will you answer my questions? Will you update soon?
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Reviewed By: kaichouneko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2010 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pleasant read. AU plot, but the cast stays in character with minor adjustments to the change in family life (ie: Inu being more open emotionally due to his parents nurturing, Sess being less aggravating to Inu for the same reason, etc.) Overall, I like how you've done this, whether it was intentional or not. Keep up the good work, and I anticipate the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2010 04:04 CDT
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The story is kinda moving along rather quickly... So I suppose you mean to wrap it up soon... I don't mind of course, it's well written and I'm loving every minute of it. I'm just curious if you're going to be done with it, say by chapter 15? At most? Anywho, I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Also, I am enjoying your authors notes, which is a phenomena in and of itself, I in general strongly dislike authors notes and think should be avoided at all costs. But yours make me giggle. So good job on being entertaining in all aspects of your story.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2010 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome is finally back with inuyasha and his family... nice that they're all making her feel at home... how will inuyasha propose to kagome?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Elfgurl96 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2010 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I especially like the end of the latest chapter. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2010 22:33 CDT
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SO GOOD!!!! Please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next! this is an awesome story
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2010 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I love this story! You are doing a great job and I hope you keep it up! Second, I am a sign language interpreter. I was so happy when I stumbled onto your story and the read about sign language that was accurate! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2010 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha and kagome are together finally... looks like inuyasha and his mom are out to get kagome an engagement ring... so inuyasha's parents knew about kagome before... now inuyasha finds out from his mother... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: dangersque-not logged in On: July 11, 2010 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here's the thing I don't get: Why is everyone so down on Inuyasha, but not Kagome? So he got a girlfriend, that's what people normally do. And the girlfriend was a witch and he was oblivious. Happens all the time. He wasn't the one that abandoned her in the most painful way possible. He wasn't the one who sulked about his problems instead of bringing them up when asked. And he wasn't the one who rolled over and gave up when the going got tough. Inuyasha should be super-pissed at his friends and family, and Kagome over this. Sure, the Kikyou thing probably hurt, but she NEVER brought it to his attention, even when he asked. How strong could her feelings have been if ONE girl was enough of an obstacle that she moved across the world instead of having one conversation?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2010 07:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha confessed his feelings for kagome... what will kagome do now?... hope they go home together... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. Looking forward to next update.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 05:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 21:52 CDT
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one wonders if she/someone is going to come out and tell him or if she's going to make him guess. i can almost guarantee with great certainty that he will probably get it wrong. --and what if kikyou does show back up, the whole fiasco starts over again. did anyone not know how kikyou had treated her? \o/ i want retribution! GRR. >=/ --♥
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