| "A New Life" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Love it!!
Reviewed By: Renee123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2011 01:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! Please continue it!! It's so very funny!! I really like the way you made Vegeta all Uke-ish!! It's so cute! I love Goku's begging requirements as well,so so amazing!! |
Title: hey!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kaidan-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ehehehhe Just read the update it was so freaking funny!!!! ahhh Im sick so I almost chocked from laughing and coughing at this part "Motherfuckers better not steal my boots" hahahha oh i would totally do that. *steals vegetas boots and puts them on* compfy!!!! Your lemon wasn't bad either but I had to rush through it cuz im at the library *looks around at strangers* Man that wouldve be weird if someboys looked at my screen!!!! Can't wait for the M-preg!!!!! your writing is improving to!!!! =) -Kaidan-Chan
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Title: Mew :3
Reviewed By: Marks-With-Markers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 01:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahahahahaha! That was too funny, especially the litte things at the end! I was laughing so hard~ :3 Anyways, it's a great story and really enjoyable! I'm going to have to get my sister to read it!XD She'll die of laughter!
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Title: hiiii!!!
Reviewed By: Kaidan-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiii!!!!! I was so happy that you gave me my first review So I decided to read your story!!!!! and review it . I like the idea your going for and I can't wait to see how it turns out for Goku and vegeta!! PS: Damn trunks why did he have to eat Vegeta's bacon!!!!!!!WHHHyyy lol that part was funny!!
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