Reviewed By: Daine On: October 03, 2002 17:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *tear* That was so sad...but so beautiful! I loved it! But I love Quatre angst...so I might be a bit biased...but it was beautiful!
You had a few gramatical and spelling errors in there, like "dose" instead of "does." And there were a few issues with spacing here and there...but it doesn't take away from the story.
I've thought about this idea of Sandrock being alive before, but I've never actually known anyone else who has thought that.
But yeah, I loved it! Keep up the good work...off to read your other fic. |