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| "Shotgun" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Shiho Carnadine [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2012 14:06 EDT
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This was great, because is the most realistic scenario I've read for the having sex for the first time. A bit akward and the nerves and all that made this fic very close to real life. And your writing is great, fluid... Loved the fic. | Reviewed By: Stroodl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2010 00:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit! best damn lemon i've EVER read! seriously, best one ever! you've got some talent!
| Reviewed By: MZephyr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2010 00:58 EDT
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I have your original "Shotgun" listed as one of my favorites on FFnet. I'm glad to see that you're actively writing, and want to encourage you to continue to do so. Looking at this story independently, I would say that it is a nice story, well-written. Please continue to write more. That said, I prefer the original. The new lemon stuff, though fairly well written, seems to me to be a distraction from the powerful emotions evoked in the original version.
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