| "Brave New World" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: HaiiroSempai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2011 19:52 EDT
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I have to say, I am rather disappointed you stopped writing this story. I looked at your other works, and I see how few comments, or how few views you have, and find that rather interesting. You have a better writing technique than many other authors on this site, yet you are unrecognized. I highly recommend finishing out this story. the more you write, the more recognition you will receive. as for the story, I like the fact that you came up with an original valid idea and reason to get kagome into the realm of Naruto. I hope you find the inspiration to continue where you left off |
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Reviewed By: IYVKER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2010 16:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it really but i want to know what will happen to kagome and if naruto is going to be with her or negi or well i dont know so pleas just conty soon i will be waiting be happy and happy chrismas, new year Hanuka and more enjoy everything |
Reviewed By: kitsune1 On: September 21, 2010 01:57 EDT
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I love this! Normally I don't touch Naruto/Inuyasha crossovers, but your writing drew me in. Please continue! I'm looking forward to it.
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Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2010 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great and I'm actually loving it.! Update real soon please!
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Reviewed By: Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly On: July 29, 2010 02:02 EDT
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Very good chapter. After Kagome meets the Hokage, Ibiki should confer with her in private. The Jewel should still be a major issue. If anyone gets word of it, there could be all sorts of trouble. Wars have been started for less. There shouldn't be any immediate action of the cliche of marrying her into a clan. Her powers are erratic and untrained. Realistically, she has no real value to a clan. Low-key is what she needs right now. Have a tutor that isn't Naruto to teach her the ways of the village. Shinobi village life is going to be more a of a change than even living in the Feudal Era. Iruka is probably busy at the Academy, so he's out. It'll look weird, but how about putting her into civillian school? Don't make her into a super-fast learning ninja girl. She was always more the damsel in distress in the series, and I doubt she's changed all that much. Her recovery should be slow but not slow enough to bog down the story. You don't recover from a 1000+ year sleep overnight. Shippo should not be the Kyuubi, it's too overdone. Maybe his descendent or something. None of the Inugami's youkai friends should be the Bijuu. Have them be wanderers or guardians of ancient places or something equally mysterious. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Walker Girl 01 On: July 14, 2010 13:19 EDT
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I really like where this story is going. I hope we'll see more of Inu Yasha and Shippou soon. :D Update as soon as you can! :D :D
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Reviewed By: Kirara_Cutie316 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2010 09:31 EDT
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this is such an interesting storyline! i love it. and you're style of writting and grammar are great. its hard to find a good, well written story lately.
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