Reviewed By: ForSpite On: May 21, 2011 21:30 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This is incredibly well-written for, essentially, porn without plot. The portrayals of the character's emotions before and after (and during) really helped carry it. The basic plot outline (role-playing gets out of hand) is almost simplistic but you carried it off well. I ended up rooting for the characters to have a long and happy relationship, despite this being a crack pairing. |