Reviewed By: J-chan On: August 04, 2002 17:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: Pretty good ! There´s virtually nothing in this story to complain about really...on the other hand there´s not too much to compliment either. I mean this was supposed to be a comedy and it has the correct "atmosphere", but there aren´t any funny scenes in the story to make much of, nor are there any good "Wacky dialouge" or anything else to make you giggle. Apart from this, it is very well written and feel like "Ranma½". |